Silly me, I didn't even think about the title when I looked at first. I thought that was a ball or something. I see now that it is an apple. It is certainly not a focal point of the piece. It could become a focal point, if you wanted, by cleaning up the left edge or by popping the color a bit.
Bringing the apple up to being a focal point would change the whole balance of the picture though. I think it might look good if you jazzed up the red a little. Luckily, you have a digital copy to play with if you wanted to try things out.
The question for me is... Does the apple being in the title make it necessary that the apple be prominent? You could always change the title too - how about "Still Life Without a Foot"?
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