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07-28-2015, 07:28 AM
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Janice at New Verse News
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07-28-2015, 08:41 AM
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Thanks for that, Janice.
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07-28-2015, 01:26 PM
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Janice, our eloquent conscience.
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07-28-2015, 06:47 PM
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Good one, Janice. An eloquent jeremiad that hits the mark.
Best,
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07-28-2015, 07:16 PM
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Thank you, Janice, from me too. This needs to be said.
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07-28-2015, 07:29 PM
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Janice this is an important witness piece.
Nice work.
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07-29-2015, 05:29 AM
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Thanks, Janice. The sorrowful state of the US.
Typo on "1986"? It was 1989.
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07-29-2015, 05:57 AM
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The Iran-Contra was 1986, and a rearrangement of my lines messed up the Wall reference.
There are always readers smarter than writers.
I could/should have written:
That was way back in the eighties, Sandinista, Khomeini, arms for hostages,
Which I will do if I ever include it in a collection of political verse. Which I would like to do, but there isn't a great outcry for that.
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07-30-2015, 12:13 AM
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Strong piece, Janice. Congratulations!
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07-30-2015, 06:57 PM
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Powerful, Janice!!! I'm crying out for a book of political poetry! What made that not work was the tendency toward propagandizing. You've proven here it can be done. So many grievances, so few voices...
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