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Thank you, Brian.

Here's a version in four-line stanzas. More singable somehow.


Always Dance in the Kitchen

Feel those shoulders twitchin'.
Love means wanting to share.
Always dance in the kitchen
When you kiss on the stair.

Flyin’ feet are bewitchin’.
Wear a rose in your hair.
Dance, dance, dance in the kitchen
When you kiss on the stair.

Trousers burst their stitchin’.
Shake that bare derrière.
Dance for joy in the kitchen
When you kiss on the stair.

Park your troubles and pitch in.
Print those steps on the air.
Always dance in the kitchen
When you kiss on the stair.

It sort of goes to 'Dance around in your bones'.

Last edited by John Whitworth; 10-17-2015 at 01:59 AM.
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