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Unread 07-08-2016, 03:55 PM
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I'm so sorry to hear that, Julie. Words fail me even more than usual.
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This is why light verse is so important. Fluff and snark forever!

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I've redacted this poem. I had forgotten this part of the Sphere was visible to the web.

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Matt,

"and roll upon the floor and then [redacted]"

This has to be one of the best lines written this year.
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The whole thing is splendid, Matt. Look out for an opportunity to use it.
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That's a classic, Matt.
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Bravo Matt. I concur, a classic.
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Unread 07-10-2016, 04:04 AM
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Thanks Douglas, John, Ann and Eric. I'm glad you liked it.

John, I sent it to New Verse News last night, so maybe they'll take, although there's so much else going in the world at the moment, it already seems a little bit like old news. I'm also wondering if I might get away with retitling it "On first looking into the Chilcot Report" (or something cleverer than that) for the Spectator competition.

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Unread 07-10-2016, 06:46 AM
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Matt,
Touch of real class! Respect.
And, to quote George W. , "Yo. Quinlan!"
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I'll be a 1980s California girl and say "Totally awesome."
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