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Unread 02-07-2019, 10:42 AM
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Other than rereading my drafts this morning, this one by Zaffar Kunial:

From Empty Words

Meaning “homeland” — mulk
(in Kashmir) — exactly how
my son demands milk.



Full-rhyme with Jhelum,
the river nearest his home — 
my father’s “realm.”



You can’t put a leaf
between written and oral;
that first A, or alif.



Letters. West to east
Mum’s hand would write; Dad’s script goes
east to west. Received.



Invader, to some — 
neither here, nor there, with me — 
our rhododendron.



Where migrating geese
pause to sleep — somewhere, halfway
is this pillow’s crease.



Now we separate
for the first time, on our walk,
at the kissing gate.



Old English “Deor” — 
an exile’s lament, the past’s
dark, half-opened door.



Yes, I know. Empty.
But there’s just something between
the p and the t.



At home in Grasmere — 
thin mountain paths have me back,
a boy in Kashmir.
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