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Unread 05-11-2021, 01:50 PM
Matt Q Matt Q is offline
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Hi Sarah,

I do like the candle being the only piece of movement here. I didn't even notice it at first, and when I saw it I started looking to see if there were other small things moving. Really like the overall image too, as I've told you already.

One thought on what to do with the text. You could maybe wrap it around the outside edges of the image: along the top, down the right handside, along the bottom (upside down maybe?), back up the other side, back over the top (above the existing text) and so on. There's (maybe) something labyrinth like about a rectangular-spiralled pathway of text.

Matt

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