[Sarah-Jane Crowson]

Hi Fliss,

They're both pretty. I love the colours in the top one.

I'm not great with photography or the technicalities involved in composition (I know the basics), but if there's specific feedback you'd like around a particular aspect of the images please let me know and I'll do my best to offer useful feedback (if I can).

For now, I guess I'd ask where they fit for you. Are they part of a long photo-essay, where you photograph the same space each day at a different time (because that would be amazing) or are you storytelling George through them?

Sarah-Jane