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Unread 07-02-2022, 04:46 AM
John Isbell John Isbell is offline
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Great cover, great sonnet!

Well done all!

Cheers,
John
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Unread 07-02-2022, 06:01 AM
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Congratulations, Fliss.

"I am also modest in attire" is great. The entire poem made me smile.
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Unread 07-02-2022, 09:26 AM
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Fliss, your sonnet was a joy to read. Congrats!
And thanks, George, for putting together this splendid issue.
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Unread 07-02-2022, 11:55 AM
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Congratulations, Martin. I missed seeing you were also included in my first reading. Those are three strong poems.
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Unread 07-02-2022, 12:33 PM
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Thanks, John I.; and thanks for your encouragement through the drafting stage ☕️

John R., thanks to you too! I'm happy the poem made you smile

Martin, thank you! Congrats again to you and to George.

Best wishes,
Fliss
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Unread 07-02-2022, 05:58 PM
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Enjoyed your sonnet, Felicity, but I'm sorry that you didn't squeeze in one more fact about the pufferfish - if not prepared properly - the poison sac detached - they are deadly - their poison is something like 2000 times deadlier than cyanide. You can only eat them at special restaurants with trained and licensed chefs.

During my Japan days a legendary Kabuki actor (when you make it really big, big, big in Japan you are awarded the title Living National Treasure which this guy had) died after devouring four portions of blowfish and declaring he was immune to the toxin.

It kinda put a damper on my blowfish orgies. The trouble is that the fish is really delicious, and because of the care required it's only served in the best and most expensive restaurants. Whenever I did have it, it was on the company dime. But I never tried blowfish again, and I never became a living national treasure. (I'm not sure they're related.)
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Unread 07-02-2022, 06:46 PM
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Lols.

I'm happy with my sonnet as it is; thanks again to George. I always enjoy reading Snakeskin

Edited to add Big Grin.
F.

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Unread 07-03-2022, 12:51 PM
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Congratulations, Martin. I missed seeing you were also included in my first reading. Those are three strong poems.
Thanks, John!

Sincerely,
Martin
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