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Unread 12-20-2023, 09:14 AM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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Witty and fun. In L10, if you use "pass up" instead of "avoid," you'll have a nice chain of "ups." You might rearrange L7 to vary how your lines start: "No longer can I justify the way." For L12, I might suggest "consuming myself: a wolf that eats its pups."

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