Thanks, Matt and Mark. (Sounds as though you should have your own show on BBC Radio 6 Music.) Oh heck. I thought my ending was okay. (And I'm impressed you got the Sinatra, Mark. I thought that might have slipped by almost unnoticed. Well maybe it did, until you got to it.) Perhaps there is an overload there, but I was hoping that would be the shock of arriving in the world. Maybe not. But I would miss "fab and gear" - wrongly, perhaps.
I know what you mean about the last stanza too, Matt. There may be something to be said about dialling it back. I will have a play around with that. Thanks both.
Cheers
David
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