Hi Ralph
I also think it's an arresting image.
The line I like least is the penultimate "rekindled by human medicos". I'm assuming "medicos" is a plural of medico, rather than a strictly latin concept word. In the UK we might say "medics" rather than "medico". But anyway, I think you could find a more engaging phrase for the miracle of rekindling. I hope your flame burns bright.
Joe
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