[W T Clark]

Hello Yves.
Ghazals are a furious joy. Your suggestions are very helpful: I agree with each of them. That's interesting about my "Meeting a Poet". I have made a revision with your comments in mind. There is another couplet now which worries me: because I hate the extraneous, but the ghazal is a perpetual motion machine only checked by the resourcefulness of the operator. We will see... Thanks, big man! this is very helpful, and I would be interesting by your response to my revision, if you trekked out to the endz.

Carl and Joe. Thank you for catching me. I am an illiterate Samuel Greenberg! No, just my own foolishness, no naive onomatopoeia.
Thank you.