[John Riley]

Thanks to each for the help. I think I'll keep it as it is for a while before revising more. I know S1L2 needs work. At this point, I want to keep "funerals." They are mythical funerals. Not accurate in details, but they do manifest a tragic truth.

As I say all the time, I'm in recovery. It is a bit like being in a mystery novel or war. Too often someone is dead. There is no mystery as to why they're dead specifically, there is nothing but mystery in understanding the cause.

Thanks again for all the help.