Hi Julie.
Good world-building here.
Thanks, though reading between the line is there a hint of 'not enough story' (or have I inferred to much?)
Would "parsimonious" really be in this narrator's vocabulary?
I can't see why it wouldn't (and they do hang around with Spinners after all.) I was worried that Caesars might be more problematic. That said, suggestions welcome.
Technically, there is no such word as 'til.
Egad. Clearly it's a bad habit I need to break. Changed, thanks.
This seems to be missing some punctuation — perhaps a comma after "wealth":
Done. Thank you
RG.
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