[Trevor Conway]

Hi Max,

I take it your comment "form constrains" is a general comment on form rather than meaning only that the form I used constrained in this case. Well, it's a question the writer should always ask, I think, if he or she chooses to rhyme or chooses a particular form. In the case of this poem, I'm not sure, myself.

Thanks for getting back.

Trev

Originally Posted by Max Goodman

Form constrains.

I don't have a strong feeling one way or the other about whether you've chosen the right constraints in this case. I assume you wouldn't ask the question if you felt the form had repaid the constraint.