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Old 05-27-2025, 06:41 PM
Yves S L Yves S L is offline
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Hello Joe,

"I'm looking at the man in the mirror"--Michael Jackson.

Ralph had a poem in the last few years about an aging N looking at himself in the mirror.

Poems about a man looking at himself in the mirror: https://www.google.com/search?q=poem...ih=92 2&dpr=1

The poem was dull because the language was flat and prosaic. At least now you have added some musicality back which lifts it quite a bit.

I am still not sure that you are doing all that much with this old chestnut of a theme, though!

Yeah!
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