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Unread 08-15-2002, 04:01 PM
Robert Swagman Robert Swagman is offline
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More Flack for Joe

Roger beat me to the punch
about the choice of 'Swagman' rhyme;
since it appears there are a bunch
your claim appears the only crime.
And as for seeking aid divine
to bolster failing assonance,
'tis easier to make water wine
that knocks one on his ass, perchance.
As for making me bellow, well
at least your verse has made me yelp;
and as for trouncing verbs, my swell,
I doubt that you need Roger's help.

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