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Unread 06-02-2006, 04:30 AM
Henry Quince Henry Quince is offline
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Harry Lillis Crosby

Mister Music, the “first hip white,”
could act — and could he sing!
His casual style concealed his art,
and thousands learnt from Bing.


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Leslie Townes Hope

Gagster supreme, more famed was Bob
than Groucho, Burns, or Benny.
On screen it was Bing who got the girl;
in life they both had plenty.


If the judges are reluctant to accept the Benny/plenny rhyme, they may substitute the colorless “many” for the latter. But I prefer “plenty”.



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