[Julie Steiner]

Gorgeous. I'm particularly smitten with the heartbeat skip in "one/love of your sorry life" and the three-part crescendo of burning "with love, with hate, with words".

And who else but this author could sling a "yo mama" at Catullus without invective?

Julie Stoner

[Janet Kenny]

Susan,
I always knew that it was yours. I said a lot of good things about it when you posted it on Deep End and I just wave and cheer again.
Janet