I like this one a lot.
'I try to say all this with one quick glance'
This is the killer for me, the line that says 'this was exactly as I say it was'. I love the last line too, 'circumstance' and all.
Wasn't wholly sure about 'Art holds the Word of God, holds back his cries.'.
Yes, it's a fine sonnet, written no doubt by a fine human being.
Alex
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