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Unread 10-14-2008, 02:00 AM
Henrietta kelly Henrietta kelly is offline
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"Focus on the music"

Yes -- I think what happens is I see that explosion of images and I feel as if I need to grab them all before they become lost to me, and they do, I can’t seem to hold them steady unless I get to scribble them down real fast. The good thing is when editing one can drop the fire brand that sparked the imagination.

I also like your idea and with a small edit can change the whole outcome.

Centre in melody
close both eyes and listen deep
for the earth has seeds


I'm glad I asked, as I always felt a bit of a cheat if others words invoked me to write. ~~~ henie


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