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Unread 10-19-2008, 02:00 PM
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Interesting haiku/poem, Tim!

S4 reads:

But forty pheasants
cleaned and bagged in the freezer?
Good until Easter.

"But" means "Only" here, but I had to think about it. The question mark helped.

Grammatical nit: shouldn't that be "But forty pheasant..."?

Duncan
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