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Unread 02-06-2014, 03:30 PM
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Pow pow! Nice, Nemo -

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Bravo! and Kudos!
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These are fabulous, Nemo. I remember the ten Teflon ladies, although when I read it now there are parts I don't recognize, which could mean either you revised it or this work refreshes itself upon rereading. Or both. Meanwhile, "Housekeeping" really struck a chord. Excellent venue too. They are very lucky!

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I like Ten Teflon Ladies for its bravura, unfinished feeling. Inspiring all.
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Good poems, Nemo, and all of them full of surprises. Nice work.
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Thanks again, assorted pals!
Siham, there were no major changes there, so I guess the poem is self-refreshing!

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Nemo, I liked all 3. Good reads.

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Thanks, Mike.

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From me too, Nemo. Congrats for fine poems in an interesting venue--new to me.
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Thanks, Janice.

It's a nice journal.
I like that there are not too many pieces in each issue.
I get overwhelmed easily. So many poems, so little focus.

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