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11-21-2014, 05:20 PM

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Good work, Nausheen!

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11-21-2014, 08:09 PM

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Wonderful, Nausheen! I love the wordplay in the poem, and the off-kilter assonance. Favorites are "piqued" echoed by "creature," and "unarmed" and "enamored." Lovely!

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11-22-2014, 10:28 AM

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Thanks to all for reading and for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it!

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