[Julie Steiner]

One of the nice things about NVN is that the editor is usually open to belated changes. If you'd like to tweak a line, ask him.

[Martin Elster]

When I saw the title of your poem (few days ago), Janice, I googled and found news about Sandra Bland, as well as videos of the traffic stop that got out of control. One of numerous nightmarish incidents that have taken place in this land of late.

Excellent poem!

[Janice D. Soderling]

Since this is bumped up now, I'll just say many thanks to all who have commented. Warms the cockles of me heart that it got response.