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03-27-2022, 09:50 AM
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It might be a good idea to move this thread to D&A where it is permissible for people to post their own work.
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03-27-2022, 10:21 AM
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Here’s my favorite haiku, by John Cooper Clarke:
Expressing complex emotions
In seventeen syllables
Is extremely diffic.
Cheers,
John
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03-27-2022, 10:55 AM
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It might be a good idea to move this thread to D&A where it is permissible for people to post their own work.
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I think this thread is better being only others' work, actually, Bob. We could always have a separate one on D & A, for our own stuff.
(I'll move it if you wish, though, Damian.)
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03-27-2022, 11:02 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by John Isbell
Here’s my favorite haiku, by John Cooper Clarke:
Expressing complex emotions
In seventeen syllables
Is extremely diffic.
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That's not quite right, John, on account of the 5-7-5 number of syllables. I believe it's:
To convey one's mood
in seventeen syllables
is very diffic.
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03-27-2022, 11:03 AM
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It's just that many of us have published short poems that may fit this project. I know that lots of us have had poems in Asses of Parnassus, for example, and poems that are in journals but not online (so they are unlikely to be known about or recommended by others).
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03-27-2022, 11:42 AM
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I agree with Jayne. I think it would make more sense to open a corresponding thread in D & A.
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03-27-2022, 12:42 PM
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Thank you, Jayne! I believe I’ve never heard the correct version of his haiku, and I appreciate seeing it!
Cheers,
John
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03-27-2022, 01:28 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Jayne Osborn
That's not quite right, John, on account of the 5-7-5 number of syllables. I believe it's:
To convey one's mood
in seventeen syllables
is very diffic.
Jayne
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Jayne, I was just counting the syllables in John's version, thinking that there's something amiss, and then saw this. Thanks!
John, I like this haiku. Thanks for posting it.
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03-27-2022, 02:51 PM
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Auden has a lot of "shorts." There are a few in this blog, but he has a great many that are fantastic. One of my personal favorites is:
Private faces in public places
Are wiser and nicer
Than public faces in private places
Another, a clerihew from Academic Graffiti is:
Lord Byron
Once succumbed to a Siren:
His flesh was weak,
Hers Greek
Robert Herrick has a boatload of short poems. Here's one, "Upon Parson Beanes":
Old Parson Beanes hunts six days of the week,
And on the seventh, he has his notes to seek.
Six days he hollows so much breath away
That on the seventh he can nor preach or pray.
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03-27-2022, 03:01 PM
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Another John Cooper Clarke
haku No 6
Smarter men than I
have been total idiots
and I've met them all
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