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Unread 05-01-2004, 01:11 PM
Carol Taylor Carol Taylor is offline
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Tim, you said audience participation, so I'll start it off with these three "maybe haikus" that have been buzzing in my head today, and invite others to post theirs.

When Lee gets a chance perhaps he'll tell us if they fit the mold, and if not what they would need to be called haikus or senryus. By the way, are they supposed to have names?

Rain on dandelions;
another lazy Sunday--
Cut the grass next week.

Fog forms on cold glass;
the smell of morning coffee
fills my small red car.

Five pounds are gone.
You, last praline in the box,
reward my long fast.


Carol



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