Robert: Cheating! To cheat there must be clearly defined rules! I didn't see anything about a time limit!
I can honestly say of the 50 or 60 poems I've written in the past six months since I started writing poetry (again or perhaps I should say 'for real' this time) I only have 2 I would say are "good" and "done." The rest linger in the caverns of computer storage waiting for me to either dump them or somehow fix them. Some are indeed hopeless. Here is one I think fits that catagory. So many to choose from...so little space...
What’s a heart good for anyway?
I remember when mine was all shiny,
Plump and unpicked not a bruise on it.
But then I dropped it on the floor,
For just anyone to kick about
And squish.
For the sake of safety
I tried to turn it to stone
But it just broke to pieces
So I added the water from my tears
Which created a mushy
Blob of red-pulsating emotions
Damn thing
Keeps getting loose,
It jumps out of my mouth
Slides down my sleeve,
Oops
There it goes again
Someone catch that thing!
What the hell…
Let’s toss it about a bit.
I’ve got bandages of all shapes and colors.
A tourniquet,elmers glue, scotch tape, staples
liquid cement, hot glue gun and a blow torch.
I keep these on hand anyway, just in case I fall
Can you smell the stink from this one? Whew!
Mel
[This message has been edited by Melalope (edited May 16, 2002).]