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#1: Calypso
#2: Requited Love
#3: Last Dance
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1. Childhood (The Poet in utero)
2. Last Dance (The Poet between life and death)
3. Requited (A poetic life)


Wonderful poems each, but I'm still a sucker for Wordsworthian philosophy.

This is my first bake-off. Thanks for an eye-opening experience.

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#1. Last Dance
#2. Requited Love
#3. The Baby and the Bathwater
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#1. "Calypso"

My only vote.
I think Andrew makes an interesting point about how poems behave in competitions.

Some of these sonnets have met with widespread enthusiasm, others have polarised opinion. Like Andrew, I find I am most attracted to poems with a foot in both camps.

When I think about the classical composers I delight in today, there are a few whom I loathed in my teens (outstandingly Ravel, and perhaps Mozart). The music I 'sort of' enjoyed when younger, I find now lacks the urgency to hold my attention.

My second and third choices are very much poems which make me want to see other work from the same authors:- in the hope and expectation that I will find something even better. 'Calypso' was the only poem here which I felt I had to accept on its own terms, or not at all.

It is not a poem I wish I had written. I know full well I could never have written those lines without being someone else.

Another feature which attracted me to the piece.
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OK I see you posted your three in #81.

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Catherine, Christopher was only adding a comment. You'll find his actual vote at the top of this page.

Ooops! You beat me to it.
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#1 Two Lindens
#2 Last Dance
#3 Requited Love

thanks!!
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1 - Sonnet #6
2 - Sonnet #8
3 - Sonnet #1
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Christopher, I thank you for the nod in my direction and for your sensible comments, as I view them. This was a motley bunch, the ten. We praise diversity of approach, but only a couple of them were, in my opinion, truly alive--and I think "Calypso..." had the strongest heartbeat.
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Saturday morning. Voting ends tonight at 11:59 p.m. EDT.

To date (with lots of time left), the sonnets are, for now, in this order (points):

1. Requited Love (121)
2. Last Dance (67)
3. Childhood (55)
4. The Baby and the Bathwater (46)
5. For Two Lindens Newly Planted on Avenue D (32)
6. Calypso Calls on Penelope (23)
7. Film Noir (14)
8. Mower's Song (12)
9. The Keepsake (10)
10. On the Ubiquity of Mobile Devices (5)

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