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Unread 06-27-2017, 01:46 AM
William A. Baurle William A. Baurle is offline
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Hi Michael,

The story went that the Hotel California the Eagles came to on tour had become a Church of Satan. And the lyrics bear this out somewhat.
Coincidentally, that was your 666th post...

Cheers,
John
Well, that's the way to scare the aitch ee double hockeysticks outta him!

To only make this worse, one night at a bar, I could have sworn (though I was drunk as a skunk or a judge) that when Don Henley sings the LAST word of this E P I C verse, I heard a guttural roaring of the word. I swear this is true. But I was drunk, and most likely, somebody fiddled with it, with a microphone, or something.

And in the master's chambers,
They gathered for the feast
The stab it with their steely knives,
But they just can't kill the beast...


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4_sc_HEJXUU - Watch it while you can, it'll be taken down quick!

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Thanks for that vid, Bill! I also love the triplets at the end in the guitar solo.

Now I’m a bit worried on account of what John pointed out. 666. I have phoebes nesting under my eaves, and the chicks are close to fledging. I've had a veritable visitation of large rat snakes in the last few days, including one that somehow got onto my roof, and one that was peering in at me (lasciviously, I imagined) through the screen door.

All just a bit too coincidental…

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Hi Bill,

Yes, that is a haunting song. Michael, I do hope your phoebes are fine.
Don Henley also wrote this:

Can we film the operation, is the head dead yet?
You know the boys in the newsroom got a running bet.
Get the widow on the set,
We need dirty laundry.

I love that line Get the widow on the set. The song also contains the line It's interesting when people die.

Cheers,
John

Update: I should perhaps point out that "Dirty Laundry" is about celebrity journalism, the paparazzi.

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Ok, I've been saving this one. I find this woman quite extraordinary. Yes it's a little baroque and over-the-top maybe, but if this isn't poetry as song I don't know what is. Makes me weep every time. (I urge you to watch the video to hear this. The voice is love/hate maybe. I love it personally)

'Emily' by Joanna Newsom

The meadowlark and the chim-choo-ree and the sparrow
set to the sky in a flying spree, for the sport of the pharaoh.
Little while later, the Pharisees dragged a comb through the meadow.
Do you remember what they called up to you and me, in our window?

There is a rusty light on the pines tonight;
sun pouring wine, lord, or marrow, into the
bones of the birches, and the spires of the churches, jutting out from the shadows;
the yoke, and the axe, and the old smokestacks, and the bale, and the barrow —
and everything sloped, like it was dragged from a rope, in the mouth of the south below.

We’ve seen those mountains kneeling, felten and grey.
We thought our very hearts would up and melt away,

from that snow in the nighttime,
just going and going

and the stirring of wind chimes
in the morning
in the morning

Helps me find my way back in
from the place where I have been —

And, Emily, I saw you last night by the river.
I dreamed you were skipping little stones across the surface of the water —
frowning at the angle where they were lost, and slipped under forever,
in a mud-cloud, mica-spangled, like the sky’d been breathing on a mirror.

Anyhow, I sat by your side, by the water.
You taught me the names of the stars overhead, that I wrote down in my ledger —
though all I knew of the rote universe were those Pleiades, loosed in December,
I promised you I’d set them to verse, so I’d always remember

That the meteorite is the source of the light,
And the meteor’s just what we see;
And the meteoroid is a stone that’s devoid of the fire that propelled it to thee.
And the meteorite’s just what causes the light,
And the meteor’s how it’s perceived;
And the meteoroid’s a bone thrown from the void, that lies quiet in offering to thee.

*

You came and lay a cold compress upon the mess I’m in;
threw the windows wide, and cried amen amen amen.
The whole world stopped to hear you hollering.
And you looked down, and saw, now, what was happening:

The lines are fading in my kingdom
(though I have never known the way to border them in);
so the muddy mouths of baboons and sows, and the grouse, and the horse, and the hen
grope at the gate of the looming lake that was once a tidy pen.
And the mail is late, and the great estates are not lit from within.
The talk in town’s becoming downright sickening.

In due time we will see the far buttes lit by a flare.
I’ve seen your bravery, and I will follow you there

And row through the nighttime,
so healthy,
gone healthy all of a sudden,

In search of a midwife
who can help me
who can help me,

help me find my way back in.
And there are worries where I’ve been.

And say, say, say, in the lee of the bay
don’t be bothered.
Leave your troubles here,
where the tugboats shear the water from the water
(flanked by furrows, curling back, like a match held up to a newspaper).

Emily, they’ll follow your lead by the letter.
And I make this claim, and I’m not ashamed to say I knew you better.
What they’ve seen is just a beam of your sun that banishes winter.

Let us go! Though we know it’s a hopeless endeavor.
The ties that bind, they are barbed and spined, and hold us close forever.

Though there is nothing would help me come to grips with
a sky that is gaping and yawning,
there is a song I woke with on my lips,
as you sailed your great ship towards the morning.

*

Come on home. The poppies are all grown knee-deep by now.
Blossoms all have fallen, and the pollen ruins the plow.
Peonies nod in the breeze,
and while they wetly bow
with hydrocephalitic listlessness,
ants mop up their brow.

And everything with wings is restless, aimless, drunk and dour;
butterflies and birds collide at hot, ungodly hours.
And my clay-colored motherlessness rangily reclines —
Come on home, now! All my bones are dolorous with vines.

Pa pointed out to me, for the hundredth time tonight,
the way the ladle leads to a dirt-red bullet of light.

Squint skyward and listen —
loving him, we move within his borders:
just asterisms in the stars’ set order.

We could stand for a century,
staring,
with our heads cocked,
in the broad daylight, at this thing:

Joy,
landlocked in bodies that don’t keep —
dumbstruck with the sweetness of being,
till we don’t be.
Told: take this.
And eat this.

Told: the meteorite is the source of the light,
And the meteor’s just what we see;
And the meteoroid is a stone that’s devoid of the fire that propelled it to thee.

And the meteorite is just what causes the light,
And the meteor’s how it’s perceived;
And the meteoroid’s a bone thrown from the void that lies quiet in offering to thee.


https://youtu.be/vRnikXRJ6hY

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Thanks for that, Mark. My teenage niece absolutely loves Joanna Newsom, but for some reason I've never really given her a chance.
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Unread 06-27-2017, 01:38 PM
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Do! Maybe I'm a teenage girl at heart, but I think this is incredible. The titular Emily is the singer's little sister (which is fairly clear from the lyrics) and not that other favourite of the sensitive teenage girl, Miss Bronte ha.

I do love this. I'd love to know what you think.
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Unread 06-28-2017, 12:43 AM
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Thanks for that vid, Bill! I also love the triplets at the end in the guitar solo.

Now I’m a bit worried on account of what John pointed out. 666. I have phoebes nesting under my eaves, and the chicks are close to fledging. I've had a veritable visitation of large rat snakes in the last few days, including one that somehow got onto my roof, and one that was peering in at me (lasciviously, I imagined) through the screen door.

All just a bit too coincidental…
**Edited out drunken stuff here.

Oh, and don't worry, dude. Now, at 668, you're the neighbor of the beast! [stole that joke from somebody]


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Edited out drunken crapolla.

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Unread 06-28-2017, 07:21 AM
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Ha. Well, thanks for giving it a go Bill. Still, an extreme reaction is better than a 'meh' reaction I suppose...
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She certainly has a gift with words. I've not listened to the performance, but what a flood of rhyme and imagery! I can't think of anything quite like it, though Van Morrison did occur to me. He's a personal favorite, as a lyricist, not just as a singer.

Cheers,
John
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