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Unread 03-14-2020, 11:48 AM
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An Easter poem of mine is up at First Things: https://www.firstthings.com/article/...easter-morning.

It was workshopped and improved on this site a while back, so thank you Sphereans.
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Oh, this is a good one, Andrew. The creed of the lost!
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ďand I am in my body thatís not mine.Ē Rather special line. We donít possess our own substrates.
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Lovely, Andrew.

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Thank you, Andrew, Allen, and Susan. And Susan, glad to see you posting from "on the other side" as it were. Stay safe, and as the Italians are saying, andrŗ tutto bene.
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Really nice, Andrew. I enjoyed it.
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It's reverential in the best way possible, Andrew. An Easter poem with proper magnitude. I am with you on all counts. As soft as the fog it is shrouded in, which is quite soft : ) Nice work.
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