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10-28-2021, 04:13 PM
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New Poem/ publication Breaks the Ice
Since I rarely visit these days, it feels a little unfair to post this but I’m happy about it and it WAS workshopped here a few years ago - and finally came to fruition. My poem “The Birth of Venus” on a new site called Lit.Hub at the News Station. Thanks, y’all for indulging me my little triumphs. 
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10-29-2021, 05:11 AM
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Join Date: May 2020
Location: England
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Con
grat
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la
tions!
It's a fantastically inventive poem. I wcsh I had been there to critique it.
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10-29-2021, 07:06 AM
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This is wonderful, Siham. I love it. I'm very glad you decided to post it.
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10-29-2021, 09:34 AM
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Love the cars rivering. Congratulations.!
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10-29-2021, 10:44 AM
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Thanks so much for the encouragement!! It’s indeed quite different than it was when I posted it here, although the last lines are the same. So glad you like it.
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10-29-2021, 01:51 PM
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I love it, Siham. Congrats!
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10-30-2021, 02:11 AM
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Location: Lazio, Italy
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This is great, Siham: Botticelli meets Jack Kerouac! Congratulations!
Bladderwracked,
Andrew
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11-01-2021, 03:11 PM
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Thanks, Martin and Andrew!! So glad you enjoyed it. It was a looong time coming. 
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