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Unread 11-11-2014, 03:07 PM
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Ed Shacklee's "The Playing Fields of Eton," set to music and pictures,
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Unread 11-11-2014, 09:51 PM
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Nice job, Ed. I enjoyed the poem and the video. And Beethoven’s Für Elise is an interesting musical accompaniment.

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Thanks, Richard and Susan; and the folks at Poetica Victorian. Apparently this has been up for almost a year and I didn't know about it.

I would never have thought of playing Für Elise in the background, but it's ghoulishly appropriate in its way. As is the fade to gray at a certain point. Ghoulishy appropriate: that's me all over.

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Congratulations!
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Just caught up with this vid, and Ed, that is a deeply affecting antiwar poem. Huge congratulations!
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Quite the final line, Ed.
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Excellent, Ed.
And that is one of the few visual/video/musical approaches to setting a poem that I have ever thought worked at all. It amplifies, rather than reduces! Bravo on all counts.

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Excellent poem, Ed, and very well presented. I am bowled over by the preciseness, the lucidity, your way with words.
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Ed, that was terrific. The anger and sadness come through all the more cuttingly by means of the restraint and beauty of the form.

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Very nice, Ed. And the audios and visuals help, rather than get in the way, which is normally not the case. Unique poem and presentation.
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