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11-02-2022, 10:01 AM
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Autumn Sky
My villanelle "Where we put our mother" which I work-shopped here a couple of weeks ago is in today's Autumn Sky.
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11-02-2022, 11:41 AM
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Bravo! Excellent work.
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11-02-2022, 12:02 PM
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Yes, well done. My favorite L5 alone merits publication, not to mention the rest.
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11-02-2022, 12:12 PM
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I'm glad to see it find an appreciative audience.
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11-02-2022, 01:04 PM
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Great. Well done, Joe. I really like that one.
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11-02-2022, 05:54 PM
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Good one. I like that it builds a strong narrative instead of going in a circle.
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11-27-2022, 12:37 PM
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Oh, I remember this one! Congrats on its publication 
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11-27-2022, 03:24 PM
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Oh, YES!!!
Congratulations, Joe. I really loved this one. On your original thread I wrote that I was "blown away" by the poem. Now I see that you cleverly changed "disease" to "dis-ease". OMG - I'm blown away even more. That's inspired!
Well done. In ****ing spades! 
Jayne
Last edited by Jayne Osborn; 11-27-2022 at 03:30 PM.
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11-28-2022, 06:54 AM
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Thanks guys, and thanks especially to Jayne for liking the hyphen!
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11-28-2022, 01:03 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Joe Crocker
Thanks guys, and thanks especially to Jayne for liking the hyphen!
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Never have I liked a hyphen more, Joe!
Jayne
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