Hi, all--
Yeah, I'm bumping up a post that might bring a poem of MINE more attention, but that's not really my purpose. I'm just such a sucker for sonnets, and Peter does such a fine job of presenting them.
I hope it doesn't seem disrespectful to comment on parts of poems--poems which the poets have of course carefully crafted to be satisfying, whole entities--but this issue is teaching me how to . . .
--start a poem, as in the first line of Amanda Ferguson's "But Gone"
--end a poem, as in the last line of John MacLean's "Moment"
--break AND connect octave and sestet intriguingly, as in Ed's "Narcissus"
. . . among other things. And I haven't finished reading each sonnet once, much less the two or three or more times they deserve.
Thanks, Peter. (And thanks, Pat.)
Best,
Jean
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