This is a competently written sonnet with delightful sonics, producing an aura bright as the cornucopia of flowers referenced. The only drawback is the amount of specialist knowledge about flowers referenced it takes to fully understand the poem, especially the pivotal soldier roses. Thus, limiting the number of flowers for a better focus may not be a bad thing. And, great explication, Cathy!
Cheers,
...Alex
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