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Unread 03-26-2025, 07:38 AM
Jim Ramsey Jim Ramsey is offline
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Default The Final Judgement

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Judgement

The old woman’s eyes,
milky as opals,
were set in a brown face, dry
and creviced as nut meat.

She patted the pine box
before it was lifted,
spat a string of tobacco,
and squinted at God.

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The old woman’s eyes,
as milky as opals,
were set in a brown face as dry
and creviced as nut meat.

She patted the pine box
before it was lifted,
spat a string of tobacco,
and squinted at God.

Last edited by Jim Ramsey; 03-27-2025 at 02:26 PM.
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