[Aaron Novick]

It's fun, harmless, and sometimes even leads to more serious poetry. So let's do it again.




However, starting in the middle has

[Ann Drysdale]

whatever the child has that has its own
.

[Jim Moonan]

x
my thoughts can twist themselves into a knot
x



(Btw Ann, that's the oddest reason for editing a post I've ever seen)
x

[Aaron Novick]

of tangled skeins and other nasties grown

[Ann Drysdale]

This is just an interjection for Jim, lest he should think I was suggesting something not in keeping with my reputation as a gentlewoman:

http://www.thinkenglish.me/phrases/press-the-tit.html

Carry on playing.

[Jim Moonan]

I rarely take note (or make note for that matter) of “reasons for edit” but this one seemingly called to me out of the ether. Now I know what it was saying: “Hey! You! Here’s a foot. Put it in your mouth.”
I knew of other meanings but none of them fit. So I wrongly assumed you had Freudianed it from the word "edit" -- Or thought maybe it was that dastardly creature "Spellcheck" that had done tit. (There it's gone and done it again).

A spades' not a spade.
A rose not a rose
but a tit's not a tit?
The gentlewoman knows.
x
x
I apologize. You are nothing but the gentlest woman in my eyes.
x

[Ann Drysdale]

out of proportion into freakishness

[Aaron Novick]

has got me starting to freak out—a lot.

[Andrew Szilvasy]

The electrical current sings accompanying jazz.

[Aaron Novick]

Oh, goodness—really? Now it's quite the mess.