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Unread 02-28-2009, 03:24 PM
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(“It is a failing in me
And a weakness of my faith
But when God does things like this
I don’t know what he means…”
- Priest at another baby’s funeral)


Into the river then
With your fragment of shadow
And your long light
Which will not succumb

But will forever cast the shadow
Of the man that you will never now become

To be the atom in the eye
That saw the world turn once

To be the seed that waits
Eternity to grow

Somewhere is a garden
Where a tree that never leaves
Is ever bare

And where your fragment of a shadow
Never fades and never follows
But is ever there
--Is this yours, Philip?
It's very fine work.
Best regards,
David
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This always struck me as a great one:

Death of a Son

(who died in a mental hospital aged one)


Something has ceased to come along with me.
Something like a person: something very like one.
And there was no nobility in it
Or anything like that.

Something was there like a one year
Old house, dumb as stone. While the near buildings
Sang like birds and laughed
Understanding the pact
They were to have with silence. But he
Neither sang nor laughed. He did not bless silence
Like bread, with words.

He did not forsake silence.
But rather, like a house in mourning
Kept the eye turned in to watch the silence while
The other houses like birds
Sang around him.

And the breathing silence neither
Moved nor was still.

I have seen stones: I have seen brick
But this house was made up of neither bricks nor stone
But a house of flesh and blood
With flesh of stone
And bricks for blood. A house
Of stones and blood in breathing silence with the other
Birds singing crazy on its chimneys.

But this was silence,
This was something else, this was
Hearing and speaking though he was a house drawn
Into silence, this was
Something religious in his silence,
Something shining in his quiet,
This was different this was altogether something else:
Though he never spoke, this
Was something to do with death.

And then slowly the eye stopped looking
Inward. The silence rose and became still.
The look turned to the outer place and stopped,
With the birds still shrilling around him.

And as if he could speak
He turned over on his side with his one year
Red as a wound
He turned over as if he could be sorry for this
And out of his eyes two great tears rolled, like stones,
and he died.


--Jon Silkin
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Unread 02-28-2009, 11:32 PM
Philip Quinlan Philip Quinlan is offline
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--Is this yours, Philip?
It's very fine work.
Best regards,
David
Indeed it is David. The baby was real and not mine. It was written, ultimately, in response to a poem (translation) by W S Merwin: "Little Soul".

Unfortunately can't post that poem for copyright reasons but I could PM it, or you may already know it.

Philip
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